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Old 05-25-04, 06:26 AM   #213
Terumoto
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B-rads a disgrace to the game, brings rap names shame/
callin others lame, old... when pretty much every verse he stole is the same/
bitten shit ... gets more boring than arithmetic, im surprised no one has ripped the bitch/
i platinum hit every dipshit that steps anywhere close to my big dick/
thats you, wannabe nigga goody two shoes... i aint never seen anyone dickride like you-do/
problem is nobody root you... nobody recruit u either, dissin the syndicate but wheres your crew n leader?/
no one will take u cos u bit-shit... verse so unco its like u proclaim that u did it/
and fuck , so ur a noob.... but do you really have to admit-it?/
ya rhymes are out-there and old, .. and i know you probly out there to show/
that u can outstand some bros... but least use a better name.. "rad" went out years ago/
really ya rap skills are cold.... u got the basics down right... still dont sound tight.. /
u start but dont know what to do then, u know the techs but dont execute'em/
u know it should sound like... you can last word right... but your rhymes lack lack the right cites/

just testin a new flow..
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