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Old 05-25-04, 07:22 AM   #10
riddlemethat
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lyrikal: that was a poor verse man, no offense but you had crappy punches,
Structure was decrepid. Ya flow was weak, and vocab was
definitely not the best someone can throw in a verse.

Shamira: Okay punches, ya structure wasn't the best I've seen, but it beat the hell outa his, ya flow was good most of the way through, some good vocab too.

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