aiight its like this
Lil Trip...man ya vocab could be decent but you fail to word ya shit properly...
and ya punchlines start off straight...I mean I be excited readin it...then it just goes whack....
Example...Mova ova you wont ever have a carer like H.O.V.A, only if you mean bein ova
cus while im spittin this shit soba, your spreadin 14 cheeks playin Red-Rova
^^Wtf?!?that last line was whack and homo as hell fam...
PUnches-4/10
Flow-5/10
Metaphors-4/10
Overall-4/10....elevate son


N-Sight....it was an aiight battle...but I can telll you didnt really put effort into it fam...and I wouldn't either...
Punches....they was aiight....more metaphors than punches though.But this punch right here sealed it...
I could stop now but the rules say..10 lines the minimum, I'm bendin' him..-
If 'wackness is no kin to him'..they're best friends, that's why it's defendin' him..-
^^^^LMFAO....
Metaphors were often and cleaver...best one?
Ur punches come at me in SLO-MO..slim, I'm too swift for them to hit home..-
I could make you part of 'Pimp's Voting Ring' you..still couldn't get votes..-*
^^^whoa!thats all Im a say
Punches-7/10
Metaphors-8/10
Flow-8/10
Overall-8/10
my vote goes to N-Sight