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Old 05-25-04, 11:19 AM   #7
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King Solo? does that mean that youre the best and only?
All im seein is a man who's depressed and lonely...

^^ pretty funny there...good opener

Got a big mouth, but studdered when i said five minitues...
Went and wrote his shit, and then he said that i writ it...

^^umm..decent...i change the tense of words to rhyme...but this sorta doesn't work..decent...eh

this guy really thinks he's great, even gave himself a crown...
challenges me... then for a while he doesnt make a sound...

^^ dats funny...lol

we all know you were writing, you made it quite blatant...
saying i pre-write... get an excuse thats not ancient...

^^ decent...not great...jus eh

yep i did... i admit it... actually, i was doing homework...
and you pre-write, why else would you make me go first...

^^ nice personals...but focusing on prewriting for your entire verse...iono...decent closer


You think ure clever asking for a 5 min spit don’t u anxiety
This only because ure the President of the pre-written society

^^ Thats funny...good opener...more --ish on prewritten...

He thinks that he’s a vet with that Open Mic award on his shelf
Talkin about newbs tryin to be vets, dude u talking bout ureself

^^ haha..dats hot..and tru...good diss yo

Knowin that ure gonna lose this battle anxiety is wat u suffering
Regretting the acception cuz u battling the fuckin tougher king

^^ boooooooo...i don't think acception is a word

Just sayin u can beat me is crazy, u been sniffing too much glue
Moaning about wack crews u just sad cuz no crew wants you

^^ dats funny..yo...nice punch

He only bitchin cuz he knows he ain’t getting nominated again
The RB Awardz cud go for years cuz another one u’ll never attain!!

^^ blah...decent closer


Breakdown

Flow: TIE
Rhyming: TIE
Disses: KING
Metas/SImilies: NONE
Vocab: TIE
Punches: KING, but Anx. had some good ones
Funniness: KING def.
Hardness: KING


Vote: KING