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Old 05-25-04, 11:47 AM   #9
t-storm
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anxiety- u had gud structure n gud flow...thats bout it
u had punches n personals but ya set-up and wordplay made them weak...
u need more creativity n cum more complex.....
2 of ya lines didnt rhyme so work on that also.......

kingsolo-u came harder than him wit punches n personals
flow woz more complex but tite.....
gud structure
u beat this cat with beta wordplay n creativity in ya punches

overall king came harder wit beta punches n creativity

vote-king solo