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...i'm da nicest...
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well i cant vote on this.....but oh well....k-trin......ur verse was garbage......all u talked about was dick...n his mom n shit that noobs say when they know nothin about battlin......LI....wasnt the greatest verse....but enough to win.....i've noticed this about ur rhymes.......that u have trouble rhymin words.....me too/then you......doesnt rhyme.....herbs absurd/name blurred nope doesnt rhyme...if u said name IS blurred that would go better......have none/just shunned.....nope definitely doesnt rhyme.....u use no multies...n since the entire line is just like a sentence...n u try rhymin the last word/words only...u gotta make sure they rhyme exactly.......u really should use some multies....ur rhyme schemes are extremly weak too......thats my impute....but u still win in this battle
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