Thread: K-Amazin
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Old 05-25-04, 12:48 PM   #13
Nyce1
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Honestly I wasn't impressed...now I can see why peeps be hatin on us noobs so much...even though cats like me spit fire...the majority of noobs are killin it

Anyway... my vote goes to K AMAZIN

You're only good lines were :
"Mass-D-bate-tion(masterbation)"
"im a premature baby im b4 my time"
and both of those weren't even punches. At least your lyrics were more complex and its obvious you put more thought into it ( compared to your opponent)

Suggestion: before you submit, do a final review of your lyrics and make sure everything makes sense. My first battle on here, I had a grip of typos that could have made me lost the battle since they could change what you're lyrics mean.

Example:"Im heavy like virgins periods so i spit that shit that will burn the devil"
this line doesn't make sense at all...but if you would have changed the word "so" to "and" it would work in ya flows and it would make some sense

D BATE

You just need to elevate your rhymes man...I'm not beefin but seriously reading will help you get more complex...you may be just startin off..who knows.. but I've learned by peepin other battles that the "that,back,sky,die" rhymes just won't fly on this site...Check out the elevated front lines and peep some of the closed battles. You might be able to learn a thing or 2.

PEACE