This was a pretty good verse from both of you but I feel that Restricted had a better overall verse. Unholy had a good story but it was too short. You need to fo into more detail with your stories so people actually feel like they are there. Restricted went into pretty good detail and it was easy to visualize this but he made up a few words like Iraqians and Adjacement and a few others. This threw your verse off a little because I had to try and figure out what you were trying to say.

Vote - Restricted

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