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Old 05-25-04, 01:58 PM   #13
Know-Gimix
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Yo this was a pretty easy vote, Black Siinz just had punches workin to the full effect--- Heres an example of what a couple battle bars should look like...

settin up this battle got me in the position of drivin ya hearse-
cuz its obvious im in 'control of dmob' like i was typin ya verse
my words are deadly there here for sure to trouble you-
and like the lil bitch group ull see '3L' before the 'W'--
This got a couple chuckles, I think the second bar was really creative-- Your whole verse pretty much went like this, lots of good wordplay, strong punches and good flow+structure.... Demobox didn't come as strong his flow was lackin, the punches weren't as hard it wasn't horrible but it aint comparin to black siinz... good battle yall return the flav sometime. Vote Black
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