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Old 05-25-04, 02:09 PM   #7
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From: REPPIN VA HARD
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C’mon C-Quence don’t be scurred of me =)…consider me as one of your best friends=)//
The one that’ll backstab you with red pens just to meet amends when the stress ends//
I’m like ya ‘Mechanical pencil’, with ‘each click the led sends’ out rewriting ur scripts//
I’m igniting with clips…you n winning wont happen like Bloods uniting with Cryps//
I’m inciting this bitch…
Your rhymes are about as real as blind people claiming that ufo sightings exist//
So good at cutting mc’s in half that most claim that I’m simply exciting with snips//
^^^
Loved thiz part had me laughin out in clazz. and i almost got sent to the office.
it wuz nice all the way through.

C
your verse wuz nice good punchez but didnt stay as consistent but overall you did pretty good.
what i think iz your best line wuz
im being easy right now, i could kill you in Alliteration
youd fumble words like dumbo turds in Foreign Nations

but the vote still goes to 40

Vote 40
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