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Old 05-25-04, 06:38 PM   #1
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Two good verses....

Restricted had a nice verse. He stayed on topic his whole way through and he had a good rhyme scheme. I just don't like how he was rhyming three lines together. I think it throws the flow way off....

L.I came with another good topical. He stayed on topic and his verse was easily visualized. His story was well told and it flowed nicely.

Vote - L.I

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