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Old 05-25-04, 07:00 PM   #11
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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yo it was a weak battle..

Eye-bad use of rhymin words, and weak context and no punches but it had aaight flow i think you should go to look at some vet's battles we can all take some pointers from them..(and that one meta. did not go unotices)

N-sight-not bad flow and aaight punches, and good word play but no metas.,you should try to fit some in ya flow's...

im gonna have to vote for N-Sight on dis one he had a betta verse...

aaight i droped an honest vote and explination so PLEASE do the same for me tha link is on my signature...
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