Trax- you had a couple good punches..i liked your opening punch..yo flow was aight..yo creativity was ok in this one.
Grim- you need to step it up dawg..yo rhymes and punches were pretty basic..yo flow was pretty good..but you need to work on them hard punches. yo opening line was not good either.
yo im not a fuckin pro or anything, but i think you both need to step it up if you want respect on this site. vote trax
Please vote on my shit..it would be much appreciated
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