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Old 05-25-04, 09:22 PM   #5
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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Ikeda sit down boi, Ace Diamond the new kid
Its gonna get messy, so baby lemme get u a new bib
^^ well thats not a punch, fill your verse with punches not self glorification
When I rhyme girls clothes be taken -off
U suck at flowin thats why ur funds have been cuttin-off
never rhyme two of the same words togther^^^

u overall lacked punches and i hate that wackass sytructure ur new so i cut you some slack
overall *3*
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mike you had that wackass structure to work on dat
bestline:You could type with your brain, and still not “show intelligence”
Your rhymes have no-relevance, put a Caddy symbol on ‘em to flow-elegant
^^good
but you did this:
you went
2
2
3
2
2
your little "mini verses" had a diffrent amount of lines
if you gonna do that faggot ass structure do it right
overall *6*
my vote clearly goes to mike 12 for harder punches and better flow
v/mike
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