please your waistin my time/
like cocaine i'll finish you off in 1 line/ weak...
your like ah rotten floor waiting to fall through/
i'm in ya head now like tylenol gettin to you/ nice....
beatin me......who ya think ya playin Soldiers of War permanent
to this site like ah marker cuz we plan on stayin/huh_
you can't beat me so now wat/
you're like old milk..your expiration dates up/dont make much sense
so be ah man, walk away and swallow ya pride/
but if not then heres another punch line.......open wide/ok....

calls him self soldier of war but i murder his crew im an army of one.....
lyrically throwin gernades, stick a fork in dis soldier he is done...... played....
im a lyrical terrorist, beating this herb and his crew wanna be soldiers.....
his rhymes are boring us we need to wake up to some foldiers..... (cofee brand) ok....
sorry i beat you, but buisness is bisness had to drop the lyrical bomb....
u challenged me and there is reprecussions BIG-NOM.......nice
ill beat uwith SPLEEN-spliting-ACTION,as i demonstrate rap-satisfaction.....
come out of the closet, dick is your number1 passion.......ok....
try to win a battle, now u and ur "platoon" got a dificult mission.......
u cant win this,i went easy,ur weak rhymes were invisioned ok....

both were pretty weak verses but i give this to discharge for better vocab, complexity, punchlines. overall, his stuff made more sense but both of you have potential so keep elevating...peace...sry if i made the wrong decision,....but here is what i have...