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Old 05-25-04, 09:33 PM   #16
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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ok
anxiety
Got a big mouth, but studdered when i said five minitues...
Went and wrote his shit, and then he said that i writ it...
i didnt like the way that flowed
it didnt seem good to me
your punches didnt hit that hard
and your flow was not good
you also lacked personals
not good
you spit pretty hott
overall on this verse i give you a *7*
below average for you
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king solo
good punches hit hard good personals and you backed your
punches up with links that prove there facts
your bestline:You think ure clever asking for a 5 min spit don’t u anxiety
This only because ure the President of the pre-written society
^ u started out hard and it was good your whole verse was made better because of this
overall *8*
my vote: king solo
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