elooch murdered dis 1 by a long 1 toxic verbs yo structure was fuckked and dat fucked your flow yp and eirthing punches was weak and your drop was juss a lil past descent

elooch-nice drop vocab stood out and u locked dis 1 down easly

bestline-Im Breakin Ya Throat Ya Spits Havent Elevated Ya Just Fakin Ya Growth
Like Friends Signing On His Cast I Got ToXiC VeRbZ Takin Foot Notes

^^ better than his whole verse 4reel lol nice 9/10

worsteline-none

open-9/10
close-9/10
punches-8.9/10
vocab-10/10
flow-10/10
structure-10/10
overall-9.7/10

toxic

bestline-PLEASE-WHORE, i'm beating you with MEAN-GORE to get ur SPLEEN-SORE, and nigga you could never have ill writtens so stop stressin ya KEY-BOARD!!//

descenty bad structure fucked my eyes up
8/10

worsteline-2345678910

open-8/10
close-8/10
punches-8/10
vocab-8/10
flow-7/10
structure-6/10
overall-8/10

winner-e looch