I need some help with my style of rapping an my punches.

hit me back if u want to join me because I have no members.
I'm a 1 mans Army I NEED SOME HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Den Den Den Den Den Den, Go go gadget dick!
Whipped that shit out, and aint no doubt about it
It hit the ground and caused an earthquake and power outage
I shouted "Now bitch, lets see who gets the best!"
Stuffed that shit in crooked and fucked that fat slut to death (Ahh!! Ahhh!)