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Old 05-25-04, 11:21 PM   #13
E Looch
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ok break down

bowelle lol ummm lmfaooooooo man brah shit was awful ya verse was basic it was an open mic piece more then a battle verse u just talked about ya selfd as much as u did him shit was weak man elevate on ya punchs an try an learn how to use personals just go peep soem shit in tutorials and that shit help u elevate


jokah um your shit was more complex then his that opener set up line lol was better then his whole verse more wordplay and creativitie but still lacked consitentcy in ya verse work on ya punchs an stay bringin hard punchs in ya verse and not fall off sometimes nice spit though

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