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Old 05-25-04, 11:38 PM   #17
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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Sparkin Beef Wit Provokin Verbs/ Ya Barkin Without Teeth 'n' Can't Understand Those Spoken Words/1
Decent 6/10

Left Beggin On Tha Street Chokin On Bum's Nerds//Gaggin On Mans Meat Like You Smokin Tha Herbs//2
Ok But Strechted 5/10

/Gleam Of Fame Crushed Like Broken Bone Marrow/ Ya Rhymin Scheme Is Flushed wit Bars That Aint No Aero/3
NO!!!^^^ NO!!!! 2/10

//Dis Ciggarette Tips His Anal Shaped Sombero// Smoke Dis Fag 'n' Destory Like The Cape Passero//(wordplay)4
Ok Decent 6/10


/Like Will Farrell I got Peeps Laughin At Ya Abnormalities/ No Hitler But Terrorizin Like ya Jew Waitin For Ya Fatality/5
NICE!!! 8/10

//Ya Diss Full Wit General Technicalities 'n' Dats Playin Wit Fiya//Bring Back To Reality As I Make Ya Clique Retire//6
5/10

I Will Lyrically Injure Marv 'n' Make Ya Look Like A Starved Draqueen Named Ginger/7
NO 3/10

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Showcase You On Jerry Spinger Unda Tha Title My Asshole Is Where He Stuck His
Finger/8
Good Finisher 6/10


Break DOwn

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 7/10
66/120.


MaRvoLousJ

u'z a little bitch da type da call da fedz,when i reach and draw da lead-
y do u rap dogg ya fukkin "flow gets sleeped on" like "water-beds"-
Nice !! 8/10


im da sickest on rb trust dis brother...marvolousjay son spit gutta-
ya career gon be like "stevie gettin punched once" u gon be a "1 hit wonder"-
(think about dat)
okk 5/10


rap battles out of me and dis fagget u know which writer's is hotter-u'z a lame dogg only "hit-single" u eva gon have is "fightin a dollar"-
OO SHIT thas hott 8/10


its nothin talk badd dunn u'll be recievin dem shot & die be4 u flee 2 da cops- when i post somthin whut u readin is hott,jay if u dont believe dat he's hott-dogg i'll put
da "pump in ya mouth" like i was waitin 4 ya "wezzin da stop"-you come da queens? dogg datz like "lil kim spendin a weekend with pac"-
decent 5/10


Flow 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punches 6/10
Structure 7/10
50/80



Four Most Comes away wit my Vote

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