Originally Posted by .::N-Sight::.
Aiyo...Here's my advice:
Lil Trip
#1..Stop leaving spaces in ur verse after every 4 lines...it looks tacky and is kinda noob-ish
#2..use better end rhyming to keep your verse tight
#3..Up metas and use better punches
Nigga name (Eeecko) Ecko, reppin differents spit like he a full blooded Negro
This aint yo Hercules Colliseum Hero, you are stayin at "Zero..' to "Zero..'
^^^ And shit like that is borderline racist...WACK...and has to GO!
Ecko:
1..Good punches...up hardness of ur disses tho
Vote: Ecko: Better overall verse
Fav. Lines from each
LIL TRIP:
Nice Bar Limit, n yo freestyles i guess you missed its Survival of the Fittest
yo battlin this forums illest, yo style is like a flame one "Blow" yo diminished
Ecko:
Lil Flip u gon get lit like u was a un-smoked cigarette
u trying to get warm but i got ur ass in a cold sweat
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