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Old 05-26-04, 01:37 AM   #8
Lil-trip
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aight...

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Originally Posted by .::N-Sight::.
Aiyo...Here's my advice:

Lil Trip

#1..Stop leaving spaces in ur verse after every 4 lines...it looks tacky and is kinda noob-ish
#2..use better end rhyming to keep your verse tight
#3..Up metas and use better punches

Nigga name (Eeecko) Ecko, reppin differents spit like he a full blooded Negro
This aint yo Hercules Colliseum Hero, you are stayin at "Zero..' to "Zero..'

^^^ And shit like that is borderline racist...WACK...and has to GO!
Ecko:

1..Good punches...up hardness of ur disses tho


Vote: Ecko: Better overall verse



Fav. Lines from each

LIL TRIP:

Nice Bar Limit, n yo freestyles i guess you missed its Survival of the Fittest
yo battlin this forums illest, yo style is like a flame one "Blow" yo diminished


Ecko:

Lil Flip u gon get lit like u was a un-smoked cigarette
u trying to get warm but i got ur ass in a cold sweat


Yeah...i don mind bein borderline thats still within boundaries n im meant to hit hard like it or love it...
as for the space ill jus do what im gonna do it breaks it down to 4 bars n what i do so im gonna keep it n i like what im doin n im gonna continue to capitalize on it, peace..