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Old 05-26-04, 02:08 AM   #6
Shadows edge
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Wow. This was absolutely terrible. Stretched bars, no punches, useless forced multis, and various other herb shit. Way too much // " and () going on in that second verse. First verse sucked hard too. Punches like these:

"
U couldn't be ill, even if u had aids then bashed-ur-meat, if u rapped visuals ur rhymes wud luk like plaque attacking-teeth// "

and

"
im up against a 13 year old kid with wack rhymes stil tryin for a record label......
he is still in that closet not admitin he likes it anal........."

will not win an actual battle folks. first guy wins for not being quite as bad, and for at least having some personals and punches.

blah.
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