GrOwN aSs MaN
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Wildfire? Come on you ain't even hot as a match,
12 and 1 on your battle stats how you do dat?
^^ funny...so u mean he lost 12, won 1?
My shits hotter than boiling water and melted cheese,
Only time yous a wild fire is when you burnin trees.
^^ U have the right Idea with ur Imagery..it just needs to be way more complex and creative...u already said u were hot...do we need to hear it again with another weak analogy?
NO
let me tell you this, you made a mistake tryin to compete with me/
I'll rip you indecently/I can kill you 5000 ways I'll pick whats conveniant fa me/
^^ DATS HOT...and honestly, that 1 punch killed RAMS entire verse
1 problem tho, WILDFIRE...ur lines are a bit stretched...Plus, what the hell is up with an ESSAY for a verse...shorten it man...shit could be dope
Both...elevate with metas and more complex punches
Vote: WIld
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