View Single Post
Old 05-26-04, 04:12 AM   #9
.::N-Sight::.
GrOwN aSs MaN
 
.::N-Sight::.'s Avatar
 
Posts: 995
IP:

Wildfire? Come on you ain't even hot as a match,
12 and 1 on your battle stats how you do dat?

^^ funny...so u mean he lost 12, won 1?

My shits hotter than boiling water and melted cheese,
Only time yous a wild fire is when you burnin trees.

^^ U have the right Idea with ur Imagery..it just needs to be way more complex and creative...u already said u were hot...do we need to hear it again with another weak analogy?

NO

let me tell you this, you made a mistake tryin to compete with me/
I'll rip you indecently/I can kill you 5000 ways I'll pick whats conveniant fa me/

^^ DATS HOT...and honestly, that 1 punch killed RAMS entire verse

1 problem tho, WILDFIRE...ur lines are a bit stretched...Plus, what the hell is up with an ESSAY for a verse...shorten it man...shit could be dope

Both...elevate with metas and more complex punches

Vote: WIld