Nice. I think it's really relatable... the flow was flawless, good use of vocab,

I Must Try and Find were My Heart Once and Always Rested..
Emotion's have Run High My Concious Has Been Tested..

Now Seeing My Thought's Written out and Expressed..
I Now must Gather Myself to Find out why im Perplexed..

^^^^^ Favourite lines. Not a lot to say, but I think poetry's all about emotion and that was def something you didn't lack... so keep doin ya thing n stay up...

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