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Old 05-26-04, 07:47 AM   #3
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okay

tyhis was an okya battle but nothing to special

riddle........your seriously need to work on your structure because it threw off you flow alot by having your structure that fucked up.........another thing is you need to work on rewording your punches so that they hit harder..................you had some okay wordplay other then that nothing goin

mad dog.........you aswell need to work on your structure but it wasnt as bad as riddles and your flow was a little easier to read.........your punches was good but you could re word them a little bit to make them hit harder......pc and keep elevating

v/mad
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