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Old 05-26-04, 08:58 AM   #7
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okay weak battle

ACE'S VERSE

Ikeda sit down boi, Ace Diamond the new kid
Its gonna get messy, so baby lemme get u a new bib
^^^wtf is this shit....filler line

U choke and cough
When I rhyme girls clothes be taken -off
U suck at flowin thats why ur funds have been cuttin-off
^^^umm more fillers

If I flow nicely,u must be rather bumpy
Ur mom so fat I be callin her Humpty Dumpty
^^^first line filler second was a weak ass attempt at a punch.....played

But she didnt sit on the wall, she fell right thru
Then she had a screwed up baby, ahah and it was u
^^wtf where do you come up wit this shit....is it prewritten???

Ur the pussy that everyone talks about, cuz u still suckin on tits
No need to cry over this...
We know u cant make hits ....
^^umm not even a whole bar........you need to elevate

i dont even need to keep goping becuase it just gets worse


mike's verse

Your like awful skaters I’ll have you crashed-into-these-“boards”
I ain’t afraid to battle any emcee like I been-to-the-wars
^^bad opener needs work

You’re new to this game like the Charlotte Bobcats
Your wackness could have forced Run DMC to stop-rap
^^^weak

You getting a win is as rare as flipping an “ace diamond”
It’s time-then to see that you can’t rap even if you had rhyme-pen
Take it easy on weak emcees like I faced kind-men
^^this was hard to read and a weak punch....okay try at a personal punch on first line

You could type with your brain, and still not “show intelligence”
Your rhymes have no-relevance, put a Caddy symbol on ‘em to flow-elegant
^^^haha funny punch.....good job

You aren’t the number one diamond so please be-gone
Cause the real ace diamond’s found somewhere under the ground of Sierra Leone….
^^not a bad closing punch but you could still use some elevating

v/mike becuase his verse was just better anyone can see dat......punches metas everything
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