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oats..........your verse lacked umm everything expect structure that was about the only thing you had on him........i like that you tryed to use some personals because i personally like using personals but noone uses them on this site....thats why i been on the Orignal RB for 5 years......but yeah you need to elevate and work on your punches and how your word shit

nyce1........you really need to work on your structure......dont put smiley faces in your shit because it is really NEWBISH and looks stupid.........when you do that it throws off you flow and you wont get any votes.......but im giving this one to you because i felt that your punches was better them him.....but you need to work on making the ending of your bars rhyme

BOTH NEED TO ELEVATE ALOT

v/nyce1

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