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Old 05-26-04, 10:48 AM   #4
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i wouldnt say your ryhmes horrible... you just need bigger words... boo, flew, crew, who, me, you.... se wot im sayin... if your words are larger and more varied the rhymes will sound better, wods dont ahve to end the wit the same thing to rhyem or sound good
"and out there i was slinging crack to live, im only slinging to rap to you kids"
shit lie that!.... similar words in between and near the end.... hope it helps holla
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