Im on fucking flames engulf the lames like you trying to run game
knowing that when you shoot you aim straight for your own chest

^^ Maybe it's just me...but there's some strange MOVEMENT on RB to fuck up END RHYME...I read verse after verse where the LINES just don't rhyme...STOP IT!..weak punch

the result of no acceptance now you pretendin you a gansta for some attention which is only getting you shot down like a hunters next dinner

^^^^????????? fuck it..i ain't readin no more

kid i see ya yappin ya mouth and i gotta tell u ur lame and all-
could be egypts god of sun, but never earn the name of 'Ra'

^^ good flow...creative...but not that hard of a punch

settin up this battle got me in the position of drivin ya hearse-
cuz its obvious im in 'control of dmob' like i was typin ya verse

^^ good punch

kid ima give u a hint about ya verses, u got lots of filling-
so if u see this 'dude reign' its cuz i threw her off the building

^^ decent closer

Vote: BLACK..his verse actually rhymed..and his punches actually landed

But..Black..u could make your verse more complex with set up...using more WORDPLAY and metas...ur flow is good...but it's a fine line and compromise between shorter liness for flow..and longer structure for more complex punches...


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