Aight
fourmost:
Your verse was cool but i wasn't feelin da fact that it was ALL punches and shit and NO kinda flow at all. Punches is good and yours was aight but I just wasn't feelin dat. And your verse wasa kinda hard for me to follow.
I rate dat like a 5 on a 10 scale.
Black Thief:
Your verse was krazy short. It had some nice wordplay I liked da way you freaked it. But as opposed to your opponents many many punches you had very few due to da fact that your verse was so short.
Hottest line:
"this battle ain't even worth it...watch how my lines damage ya/
this amateur is whack...tell me 1 nice mc who's from Canada"
All in all I felt your verse more because of da wordplay and flow you freaked and your structure. But make your joints a little longer.
Good shit yall.
vote=black thief
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