***Man Down***
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IP:
[QUOTE=shamira]this nigga got to be fake melty like plastic, instead of regular DNA his blood is the color of battery acid//
your truly, a loser he’s afraid to show his pic, u tell me I want to suck your dick, I have no time for tooth picks//
this bitch doesn’t know what bars is, I told u to stay off the shit in the first place, want to chase men around so much u forgot how cum taste//(slurping the bitch up so much)
Why u talking about MJ, cause he kept u underneath the covers, now u trying to say your ass wasn’t there, or u didn’t see it, this bitch is acting like he blind like Stevie Wonder //(there’s a ribbon in the sky for our love...lol)[/QUOTE]
overall performance: 7/10
these are sharmiras best lines. blackmon your shit ain't even worth postin. shamira you kill him. you structure was good. spittin first is always a disadvantage........ furthermore shamira don't try to cram punches in to your lines. you could have killed him without a punch. better punches and lyrics period. return the fava
vote=shamira
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"Don't put your mouth in motion before you put your mind in gear."
THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE
I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS
SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE
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