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Old 05-26-04, 04:58 PM   #7
Action
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From: East Harlem
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Flow - Mike's Flow Was Way Better Although I Think If You Don't Seperate Ya Bars Wit A Line It Would Flow Even Better. Ghost's Flow Wasn't Too Good.

Punches - Mike, He Had Better Punches, Ghost Aint Really Have Any Punches.

Personals - Mike, Stronger Personals. Once Again Ghost Wasn't Real Strong In This Area.

Creativity - Mike, Ghost Aint Have Any Originality In His Verse

Structure - Mike. Like I Said I Wouldn't Skip Lines Between Bars But Overall Ya Structure Was Good. As For Ghost, You Need A Lot Of Structure Work Dawg.

Overall - No Disrespect To Ghost, But Mike Basically Manhandeled You In This Battle Son. You Need To Up Ya Game A Lot. Ya Lines Wasn't Hittin Hard At All But Keep Workin. As for Mike, You Had A Pretty Good Verse Dawg. Keep It Up.
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