stop with all this bullshit so much got damn freepostin imma vote

Lx your shit was aiight but its still a little 4th gradish you need to up your vocab and I HATED your closer it was garbage..your verse was aiight they didnt all flow well together but you kept it together and your shit wasnt stretched i think you had 1 or 2 (pretty nice) lines but none of them made me go (OHH) so your verse was ok
30/50

Potential: you had good wordplay your structure was bad it was allllll sstretched but you had good flow..try to shorten up your lines it makes your verse look better more organised and makes it easier to read...i was feelin the verse doe you had good multi's and punches and you killed him with the wordplay and you kept it consistant you didnt fall off..nice

37/50

i give my vote to potential

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