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Old 05-26-04, 05:28 PM   #9
Triple_N
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Decent spits nothing great by both, Breakdown for Atmosphere

hahaha..im battlin this one bitch and looky it's you//
I know alotta more men that has more pussie then you//

Weak opener 4/10

Girl listen...
I'll give u 60 minutes to spit while I jst stay and wait here//
Cuz 20 min. of ur borin shyt literaly sounds like shakespear//

Weak punch but nice try 5/10

No wonder u did a no-show in a battle against valor and blacks shyt//
Cuz you know your rhymes sound like garbage and I'd might as well trash it//

Weak again 4/10

Jst imagin you've sed ur spit to da croud but still nobodys clappin//
Thats how you gonna feel wen you loose so get ur wack rhymes and start packin//

Weak!! 4/10

If you ever become a bitch you won't get one dick, believe me//
Cuz no guy would want ta get near you afta they've seen me//

Made no sense 2/10
Overall: 19/50

Breakdown for Dangerous a.k.a disasterpiece

You say you throw punches, but swing like a 'Girl',
Come out of your mind, you aint Queen of the World,

Decent opener 5/10

Lack class and substance when your flows Drop,
You should start a 'Hoe-Stop' and open your own Shop,

Weak punch 4/10

Hold the mic like a phat cock, no one hears what hear what ya Say'n,
While you gargle utter shit that you later Sprayin,

ok punch 6/10

Like a manure spredder, you just toss out Shit,
Aint A line you said worth a responce Bitch,

Filler 4/10

But it's typical that a scary hoe still living in a 'Fairy-Tale',
Don't stress the head, Lossen up the 'Pony-Tail', (LoL)

Ok punch 5/10

Im Through, Take It As It Is, lol!!!!!

Its All Over With'
Now it rains, It pours, no more retor or your evicted from This,
Come back with something real and fuck the Plagerist,

Decent closer 6/10
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Overall: 30/60
All in all both of you came pretyy weak in this one dangerous jus came a little better sop she gets this battle in my opinion
Vote: Dangerousmind
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