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Old 05-26-04, 09:57 PM   #11
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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mike 12
please im begging you FIX that peice of shit structure
structure was wack but yours was beter than his
you had better punches and more north carolina personals
but your structure is really fucking wack
please believe
work on ya structure
overall *6*
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ghost rider
terrible terrible structure that wasnt even a true battle verse
weak elementary punches
horrrid verse overall no personals
your the definition of wack
so elevate
work on ya structure punches make it flow better
and ad personals
keep tryin
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propz
hit the link up in the sig with an honest vote
both of yall
peace
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