'Big Kountry', Not Known As 'Big', Just Known To 'Dig Bluntly',
Giving A Verse So 'Hip', He'll Have To 'Hop' To Confont Me, ok...pretty good
Im Leaving This Kid Hungry, Infact Ive Never Heard Of Him,
Even Feeds Off His Own Name - BK - Burger King, nice....
Its Like A Murder Ring, This Guys Getting Ridiculed,
Making Him Sweat Like Keith, Realised He's Not 'Big At All', dont really get
Best Know Im The Winner Fool, Im Killing This Pusher,
Kountry Couldnt Be Sweet If He Was 'Swimming In Sugar', nice.....
Let Me 'Finish This Puller', He Must Think He's America,
Just Represents A Fat Kid - Or Atleast A 'Cheap Replica'. nice ending....nice personal....-


2nd verse
well if the coke has arrived, i gotta go to stuff it in my socks,
your only the "biggest white threat", cuz you swallow seamen out of cocks, ok...played..all the sex shit
strait out the blocks, your hope has nothing to due with a smile,
they call you snapshot, cuz you heard me and "froze" for awhile, nice personal....
you dont "produce" punchlines, you produce pictures,
ok sanpshot they only ladys you get, are "perment fixtures", nice
take your "posse", they should start calling you flash,
cuz the only reason you want a calbo, is so people dont think your ass, nice flow...
stop doing text ya wack, or you wont make it, shit
but i'd have to label this verse advice column for him to take a hint. ok....
k rereading


Leaving This Kid Hungry, Infact Ive Never Heard Of Him,
Even Feeds Off His Own Name - BK - Burger King,
Best Know Im The Winner Fool, Im Killing This Pusher,
Kountry Couldnt Be Sweet If He Was 'Swimming In Sugar', nice.....
Let Me 'Finish This Puller', He Must Think He's America,
Just Represents A Fat Kid - Or Atleast A 'Cheap Replica'.
nice flow, not much multies in either verses. nice finisher....
3 punches


strait out the blocks, your hope has nothing to due with a smile,
they call you snapshot, cuz you heard me and "froze" for awhile,


k this goes to snap shot. both had good verses to start off with but ss had more punches which ultimately made the different. sorry this was extremely difficult to vote...i mite be making a mistake but this is my opinion. peace...btw both verses had nice flow.. but not much multies

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