Every time you rhyme, you need to spit that shit-in-a-can
The only reason why I slit my wrists is so that I could “give-you-hand”
- funny opener, good punchline
You need to find hope like searching for stars in the “night-sky”
You “might-die”, the only way you’d win with a verse is if you “write-mine”
2 straight bars with good punches, nice imagery also
Look this is GP without a glove cause he will never “catch” a win
You couldn’t match-with-Jin, you got me pissed off like you scratched-my-timbs
Not as hot as the previous 2 bars but this had a good flow, decent punch dont really feel the setup
No wonder your ghost cause your something nobody here wants-to-see
Save ya wack raps, and maybe you should try being an emcee for Halloween
funny punchline, good setup- i liked this bar alot
You don’t ride ghosts, you couldn’t win even if you got Casper to write-your-verses (ghostwriting)
Your mics-get-nervous cause you never spit ill like you tight-with-nurses
real good bar, good play off his name settin up another good punchline
Mike12Ikeda is what this “Tar Heel” is tripping-on
You couldn’t even beat WhitePowder cause you’d be sniffing-wrong
dont really feel this verse here, its not bad but I just wasn't feelin it
You’re a “pain in the ass” like my “rear’s-shot”
GhostRida is the reason why Petey Pablo’s career-drop

Since you got into the scene, you were the only one that “raised-up”
You got the rap game mad like a mom with a lazy son cause you got this game-shut

You’re the reason why the baby blue ball jerseys went-out-of-style
Your flows will always remain dry like Egypt went-out-of-Nile…..
I dunno while these bars aren't really bad there not as hot as the first few bars which were pretty deadly-- all in all good verse though...

ayo check it.....i'ma murk this bitch nigga real quick,talkin about i need a ghostwriter,u betta off stealin my shit//half ya shit don't even go together,u ain't dissin me,half the time u was givin props in ya shit B// This wasn't as well written, the vocab and rhyme are compromised with saying shit twice- I felt what u were tryin to convey but I think you coulda conveyed it better.
why you all my on nuts like my washcloth,i'ma put ya in the ICU,with ya mothafuckin limbs off//- You structure is gettin all fucced up now, decent rhyme but you coulda made this a multi with little effort..
bitch nigga i'll spit in ya face,cause ya pussy like a fag,gettin sprayed wit mase//i'll have ya pants wetted like ya was 2 years old,i spit natural fire,that will burn through ya soul//take a picture cause this is a kodak moment,get ya mommy and ya pussy ass daddy,an take ya ass home cause u knew u didn't really want it........bitch holla back
You gotta write with a style thats easier to follow so I can even see where this shit is sposed to rhyme and where 1 thought stops and another starts.., it just looks slapped together with a choppy flow and strange structure- Your opponent had creativity while making it easy to interpret and read for the reader... try and work on this and you will get alot more votes in the future.... Vote- Mike12

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