Haha....^^^^^thats your verse, you in way over ya head kid

Ok look kid, Rule #1 when making personals is stick to the facts
To make it worse, ya punches were more played than "kanye west" tracks
I mean look at ya verse, you spit fillers by the bunch
Man, even if u owned "tropicana" u couldn't manufacture a "punch"
For you to get at least one vote in this thread is gon be a real strife
Your lyrics are "juvenile" they need good rhymes "in they life"
Your verse is wack as fuck, but for your effort I applaud
Its sad tho, cuz wit verses like that u gon get "sonned" more than "baby wards"
Did u even see ya verse, it has exactly 0 lyrical worth
Its not ya fault, I seen ya pic, you've been "fucked since birth"
I was surprised to see u asian, you tryin' to be next jin?
U seemed caucasian, cuz lookin at ya verse u'd think "Vaniila ice" is ya "next of kin"
I can't even call ya rhymes newb, cuz they younger than u in ya pic
I mean how u gon challenge a vet, when ya rhymes still on "wic"

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