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I think Rumple got this one Obi came weak with the structure it is hard to pick out the rhymes it looks more like a story when you type the punches were good and the personals aight but you need to elevate a lil bit more on the structure if u want to pose a threat.
Rumple nice verse i liked the way you broke it down i.e warm up 2 closer i liked the multie for the closer perhaps my fav line in this and the Gunner line. I think you did come harder in this battle but the lines were a lil stretched so work on that but otherwise good battle peeps.
V/RumpleSmoothspin
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furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born
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^ Amen Brother ^
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i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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