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Old 05-27-04, 05:43 AM   #10
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this was a very weak fuckin battle man!!!

the flow was off in both spits and both verses were good definitions of stretched bars. both u need to work on shortening those lines to get a better structure and flow. neither one of u came with any real punches i think but i give it to discharge cuz he just did better than toxic. he maybe caem with one or two personals and he threw in some links which shows a little creativity.
but seriously if that is the best you to can do then u seriously need to elevate a lot, NO DISRESPECT or anythin, just pointin out ure big flaw!!

V/ - discharge for being less wack than toxic.
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