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Old 05-27-04, 09:11 AM   #14
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king solo

I’ll choke u with ure own flow tying ure lines around ure neck-yo
And have my first rhyme deafening u like a never-ending ECK-O [echo]
^^Not a bad line okay punch 6/10

Fuck this clown, he recognises royalty…see’s me and bows down
I run his crew; I’m in the back of his sig, lyin back wearin my crown
^^umm not really a punch but okay 4/10

I’ll beat ure ass with just a twist of my wrist and a clench of my fist
Already beaten Black Thief & Anxiety, u just another on my chryme list
^^humorish and hott personals...good 8/10

No wonder u in the Chryme Sindicate cuz lyrically u fuckin breakin laws
Rhymes like sex and u still a virgin, cudn’t get a HO if u were Santa Claus
^^haha first line good second just a filler 5/10

With an Authentik IQ I roll with the AI crew…I’m lyrically intellectual
Then this fool, can’t tell what sex are you…u must be a fuckin transsexual
^^haha humoris punch again 7/10

Like a heat-seeking missile my lyrical spits will come at you directly
U shud forget battling for now and take a lesson on how to vote correctly
^^not bad 5/10
35/50 points


ecko

imma murder this faggot like he was motherfucken royalty
fuck nicky fletcher............. he aint nuthin but a girl to me
^^you should lose the battle just cause you feed of his verse wit you first line 0/0

he gon' get tore up like he was in jail........he dropped the soap
fucker get off me.....theres no time to fucken grope
^^okay i guess 6/10

u gonna get tricked....look who has the crown motherfucker
go lick a lolipop fool im not the one whos the sucka
^^umm not realy a punch jus filler lines...1/10

people must think u gay.. cuz u make the point to say u straight
u jus a fucken wannabe of alexander the great (King of Macedon back in the days)
^^BLAH...5/10

u wear all black cuz u know this is ur fucken funeral
u got no fuckin.... turns(chances).......this aint now fucken sterring wheel
^^funeral and wheel dont rhyme maron....2/10

u say ur royalty unborn but ur dopeness doesnt show
although u's a king you'll never be on my plateau
^^gettin better...7/10

this is the Eckz-Factor and im always right on point
im rippin u to peices solo fuckin Joint for joint
^^ehh...4/10
25/50points

king wins for better punches structure personals and a all around better everything verse

yo peep my battle against unholywun in the text tourny if you get time.....pc
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