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...Belong...
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Boaty got this quite easily City u really need to work on your structure coz i had to read ur verse twice to get the rhyme scheme it needs to elevate also you had no wordplay except for the Pam line which wasnt all that good. Try improving your wordplay and punches the personals are there but could do with improving to better luck next time dawg but boaty got this due to the experience.
V/Boaty
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Originally Posted by High Dro
furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born
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^ Amen Brother ^
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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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