BREAKDOWN

riddlemethat
yo dawg for a first time u did aight i guess. u had some ok flow but it needs a lot of improvement and ure structure was wack man, ure lines were stretched like fuck. u had some ok punches and a couple of personals but other than that ure spit was pretty basic. u need ot beef up ure punches and work on more personals to get wins playa. OVERALL 6/10

mad dog
dawg, u came gud in ure verse, ure flow was a little choppy in places but it managed to stay consistently ok throughout the verse. ure structure to cud use some work cuz sum of ure lines were a little stretched. ure punches were gud, some were really strong whilst some were pretty weak tho, i liked ure opener, pure sickness, as soon as i saw the cat's name i knew u were gonna drop sumthin like that. u need to put more thought into ure punches tho, beef them up some more and fix ure structure.
OVERALL - 7.5/10


V/ - Mad Dog

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