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Old 05-27-04, 10:09 AM   #7
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U got no skillz Jnr, u shud try learnin rap as an extracurricular activity
Dude u cud rise infinite times and u’d still be lackin creaTivitie

^^ decent opener...wasn't too special tho

Winnin this for u is vital and yet u always spit like u practicing for a recital
Ure lines take wackness to a new level; u got a better lyric under ure title *


^^ good personal...decent punch


I’m explosive with rhymes, I’ll blow u up with my pyrotechnic spits
Beat u so bad have u looking more swollen than Kryogenix’ Lips

^^ AIYO..Careful wit dat...i heard u made racially insensitve remarks before...so chill out...punch was just okay


King evn wit ur thinkin cap u stil couldnt cum close 2 my creativitie`
you could neva surpass my versitililty,lossin to vets is ur only responsibility`


^^ good opener...hit pretty hard

Couldn’t comprehend my apex…ur betta off coping like double tape decks`
Be careful who you battle …cuz we all no you only win against fake vets`


^^ PLAYED the fuck out..But...sorta tru..so now personal

A matter of fact king you on my dick cuz I kill kids uniquely`
Cavity n ur palm, giving me a hand job is da only way he’ll beat me`


^^ BEAT ME LINES are PLAYED...decent closer

Flow: Tie
Rhyming: Tie
Punches: Creativ

Vote: Creat...harder hitting/more creative verse

Plus...King..Stay away from ethnic/racial bull shit aiight...kid can't help if he has big lips...it's not like saying HE'S UGLY...that's different..get it? if you don't...then, I feel sorry for you