I’ll choke u with ure own flow tying ure lines around ure neck-yo
And have my first rhyme deafening u like a never-ending ECK-O [echo]

^^ good punch forced rhyming

With an Authentik IQ I roll with the AI crew…I’m lyrically intellectual
Then this fool, can’t tell what sex are you…u must be a fuckin transsexual
Like a heat-seeking missile my lyrical spits will come at you directly
U shud forget battling for now and take a lesson on how to vote correctly.


^^ decent all around punches...nothing special

imma murder this faggot like he was motherfucken royalty
fuck nicky fletcher............. he aint nuthin but a girl to me
he gon' get tore up like he was in jail........he dropped the soap
fucker get off me.....theres no time to fucken grope

^^^ NO NO NO NO ..this isn't doing anything to SOLO...use personals...and leave the PICTURES OUT...thats some Latinkitten wack shit...aiight

u wear all black cuz u know this is ur fucken funeral
u got no fuckin.... turns(chances).......this aint now fucken sterring wheel
u say ur royalty unborn but ur dopeness doesnt show
although u's a king you'll never be on my plateau
this is the Eckz-Factor and im always right on point
im rippin u to peices solo fuckin Joint for joint

^^ This is too simple...set-up ur punches with some level of complexity

Also...im not feeling starting each line out with U..U..U...U

Vote: King...better all around verse