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 Unholy thinks he thy poet everytime he thinks he feels Perplexionp...His boyfriend fucks his mind so much hes going in no direction...
 
 ^^ ??..difficult to comprehend..reword it...sounds like a diss tho
 
 Made a thread "Back Stage" about being Poetry Corner Mod...
 u was denied but could mod Rhetorical Insights now he think he a god...
 
 ^^ good personals...but, your flow is choppy...reword it
 
 You the Unholy Wun...deffinition is not holy the wicked one is gunna run...
 Cause i sit here and listen to "Kayne West" as he singing Jesus "Walks" son...
 
 
 ^^ aiight...decent
 You tryed being in the war but you got Ristricted as a spy in iraq...
 You got caught and now a POW everyday gettin fucked in your crack...
 
 ^^ BLAH...not feelin the continual use of gay humor
 
 This is Insane How is ~LT~ Terrosisin the Game..
 Did u Pop a Membrain well feel my Words Bring Pain..
 Guess Who?Well Not You cause ur Def Not a Vet..
 Ur Jet-Set to SuckyVille u can beat me?Wanna bet..
 
 ^...simple, but the last line was a good punch and beat anything in his first 4 lines
 
 Hot Line-Up maybe u can win if u put ur Heads Together..
 Wether u go as 1 or Seperate ull Beat me....NEVER..
 Let me rap-It-Up Like u were Another BET Comercial..
 Well this Win for me Shows u bein a Vet So Contriverisal..
 
 ^^^ decent
 
 Vote: Unholy...punches actually landed
 
 
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