yo this was close accualy

lil- man your sturcher sux balls man thats it if you work on it your pnuches will hit batter your flow was better but thats it man

ono- man your sturcher sux to man dont put spaceing in bettween each bar i know what a bar is and i think everpne on here does (retack that some cant even rap) but if oyu work on that maybe your played punches will land alil bit better

v/ono

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