rumple takes this easly

other dude was weak.......punches didnt hit.......your flow was off and your structure sucked......you need to elevate a bit more and shit.....

rumple.........your verse was okay but you aswell need to elevate.......your punches was okay but they wasnt anything special.........your structure could use some work aswell.....but you took this easly

hit this up please
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...422#post1315422

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