I thought this battle was kinda close but Aillight had the edge on this one.... v/Ailight
Lyrical Method...I don't know if all your battles are structures like this but I could imagine it will effect your votes if they are. My advice to anyone who writes numbers at the end of each line or bar is STOP. The reason is, if you are numbering the lines usually one of 2 things are happening...either your structure is making your flow hard to follow so you have to "instruct" everyone on where the line ends....or the other case is the lines are to long or stretched..
I think Aillight had a couple decent punches..
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"u heard I wanted 2 battle n u got quite frightened//
cause I'll expose u as a fag who hit more men than Mike Tyson//(hit-slept with)
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rappers is always postin last, cause they scared 2 battle me first//
but I still stick my foot N they ass like footlocker havin a cavity search//"
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This was decent, especially the footlocker line, even though I would have changed "havin" to "doin"
Both of yall had some lines that didn't make sense or didn't rhyme
LM
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"cuz this kid is gettin fucked up like i slipped him date rape"
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Ail
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"go get a crew so u'll have d/r votes 2 help, r//
get busted on wit more facials than a health spa//"
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this didn't rhyme
and the last thing..USE MORE PERSONALS....
stay up yall peace