first off let me say PIMP RAWB is a HOMO for being a no show at our battle
Damn this is pretty close...I still don't know whom I'm gonna vote for... but we'll find out when I break it down...
Both yall verses really consisted of 3-4 bars
Action
Quote:
"This Kid Admits He Never Gets Ass All He Do Is Look At Internet Pics When he Jack-et.. 1
And Like Afleck Lickin Dessert Topping Off J-Lo's Backside You Gettin Ya Ass Whipped.. 2
Tryin To Talk Bout Guns But a Frog Under Ya Burger The Only Time You Seen A Mac Jump.. 3
Let's Be Real Even If This Mark Had A HI-C In His Suitcase He Still Couldn't Pack Punch.. 4
Ya Know The Kid Action Got More Venom In His Veins Then The Crocodile Hunter.. 11
This Man's Been Slain And I Take Picture's Of My Victim's So Stop And Smile Sucker.. 12"
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Jacket
Quote:
"Yo In this battle boy, im the one gettin Action
Cuz you so damn bad you get votes in fractions.
Im gonna plaster my rhymes up on all over yo head.
So every time think of a winnin, you’ll think of me instead
Dawg I think you need a tip, cuz I got all the fuckin trix.
you should start a fuckin battle at the Special Olympics.
And you still wouldn’t win, cuz you just no good at rappin.
And I bet a guy could even beat ya speakin Pig Latin!"
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the rest of it was just blah...and filler lines
I think both of your decent personals evenly match up
Personals:Tied
Structure: Jacket (I hate when people number their lines)
Flows:Jacket
Complexity:Action, for the few lines that were good
Punches:Jacket
v/ Jacket even though I expected more from Action